Oh, I loooooove this. Much like Andrew, I want to read this some more to really feel it in all its three dimensional glory, but this is unctuous, textural and alive, like a separate entity.
I’m really looking forward to your SUM FLUX story.
Thank you—unctuous, textural, alive—if my poem had ears (it might), it would be blushing right now. Yes: a separate entity, slinking around with its own pulse. SUM FLUX, Volume 2 coming soon—let’s hope it lives up to the same three dimensional glory!
Thanks man. Yeah, this one is packed. It sets up most of the major themes of the next SUM FLUX story. I'm really pleased with how it turned out. I appreciate you, man.
So so good!! I said it before, I love the way you write.
Oh, I loooooove this. Much like Andrew, I want to read this some more to really feel it in all its three dimensional glory, but this is unctuous, textural and alive, like a separate entity.
I’m really looking forward to your SUM FLUX story.
Thank you—unctuous, textural, alive—if my poem had ears (it might), it would be blushing right now. Yes: a separate entity, slinking around with its own pulse. SUM FLUX, Volume 2 coming soon—let’s hope it lives up to the same three dimensional glory!
I’m confident that it will!
You went blue!
great figurative language. I need to read this a few more times to fully digest it.
Thanks man. Yeah, this one is packed. It sets up most of the major themes of the next SUM FLUX story. I'm really pleased with how it turned out. I appreciate you, man.